Shall we play a writing game?

[Apulu_Imback]

Well in this game you need to say me a sentence and I will make a poetic piece out of it. You need to then rate that piece. My English teacher suggested this game for my practice since nowadays I'm out of ideas for poem when poems are my speciality in writing.

[NathanDavis]

" When I left that sea... a wave moved ahead of the others. She was tall and light. In spite of the shouts of the others who grabbed her by her floating skirts... she clutched my arm and went leaping off with me. I didn't want to say anything to her... because it hurt me to shame her in front of her friends. Besides... the furious stares of the larger waves paralyzed me. When we got to town... I explained to her that it was impossible... that life in the city was not what she had been able to imagine with all the ingenuousness of a wave that had never left the sea. She watched me gravely... No, her decision was made. She couldn't go back. I tried sweetness, harshness, irony. She cried, screamed, hugged, threated... I had to apologize. "

[Dinosaursandanime65]

My sentence to you:

Certainly, one of the most asked questions about life, and surely one of the most popular: How far out does it go? A mystery that’s sparked the imagination for many of us. “Do there exist other universes”. “What do they look like”. “How do they function”. Here today, my brothers and I answer such questions and may I tell you, there is even more beyond a single universe. Using our gifts from God and his Representative, we’ve been enabled to show you all what he’s made of life………… Hybrid Realm, from old ages to present. The seas above float and soar. In the Crests, metallic humanoids dwell its depths. From solar systems to Realms, planets of every kind, all playing out through the circle of life.

[serious]

I am not really sure what to say. Seems like a good game though

[Apulu_Imback]

It could be sci-fi related as well. Seems like you are interested in that topic. It could be anything.

[serious]

@apulu_imback

Terraforming is a very slow and gradual process of transforming a planet.

[Apulu_Imback]

If you want to make it last, don't do it fast,
The more slow it is, the more precise it is,
Rushing the things won't work, you don't know which silly mistake may lurk,
You can't rule the nature, Nature can rule your future.

[serious]

@apulu_imback

Very good. You have made a good poetic piece out of what I said.

[Apulu_Imback]

Thank you!

[AviatorTom]

I wish I could walk a mile in someone else's shoes, but I only have sneakers.

[Apulu_Imback]

You'll never know unless you walk in my shoes,
You'll never know cuz nobody couldn't,
As everybody see what they wanna see,
It's easier to judge me than to believe.

My shoes are worn out for the harsh road,
I am fated with...
Please lend me yours,
Cuz you have it easy.

[Apulu_Imback]

Walking in your shoes and strength I will be unstoppable... I will walk thousands of miles in this harsh road.

[AviatorTom]

Very nice... good creativity

[Apulu_Imback]

Thank you, kindly rate in numbers :)

[AviatorTom]

I'd give this a 93/100

[Apulu_Imback]

Thanks a lot :)

[TheSpaceGnome]

Writers should always be coming up with new ideas.

[Apulu_Imback]

The mid-term exams just stressed me out to think of anything. Also I already wrote many poems based on my surroundings. School, home and my city streets. I need something new.

[KostasKouvalis]

The bright white washed buildings hurt his eyes.

[Apulu_Imback]

She was imperfect, yet she tried
She was all exhausted, yet she tried,
People gave up on her, and at night she cried,
Yet she is all perfect, she is mine.

But now she changed, trying to age like wine,
People won, cuz she changed without any whines,
She used to be perfect, she used to be mine,
For she isn't now, she changed and it hurts my eyes.

Wow I can make out a song from this, thanks for the idea!

[KostasKouvalis]

I like it, even though it has nothing to do with my sentence

[Apulu_Imback]

I thought you meant renovating the building. I used that idea about a lover changing herself. Wait I will try making another one.

[Staximus]

I was lost at sea, but the ocean was in my mind.

[Apulu_Imback]

I was troubled finding a way in alley but I aimed to walk over the highway.

[Sonorous]

And they lived happily ever after.

[Apulu_Imback]

Melting the doors composed of darkness and depression, they discovered a whole new world with blooming flowers to reside in.

[Cubus]

All kids leave home, someday

[Apulu_Imback]

You see every fruit falls down once it is all grown. They fall down to become their own tree and replace their parent tree.

[Cubus]

Nice

[Apulu_Imback]

Thank you, kindly rate in numbers :)

[Anonymous]

You know the code, "when a mouse passes on cotton who can hear it... who can hear it".

[Anonymous]

I have all this love to give; but no one wants it.

[Apulu_Imback]

I'm a glass full of water, but nowadays people prefer to drink soda. No one drinks water from me.

[Opinion Owner]

7/10.

[Apulu_Imback]

Thanks! More than I expected.

[Opinion Owner]

You're welcome