This is Ntino in his Dragon Bolt form

And this is Kavliaris is her Burning Blood form.

Objectively Kavliaris definitely has the cooler looking transformation. There’s just more to it and Ntino looks a little stiff here. I drew him transforming in the book finally and he looks fantastic but Kavliaris is just going to look even better when she achieves this form. They’re also basically siblings but I’m pretty sure they get together in a few years, haven’t gotten to that point yet though.
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Kavlairis. Overall I really like the colour palette, and her legs, compared to Ntino.
I like the top creature cause he looks more innocent and relatable. The second figure is also well done but looks more impersonal cause her likeness is more divergent from human bodies or mammalian creatures. Maybe if you make her a sea fern or coral reef one, she will seem more attractive to young readers.
Intriguing take. I guess you could say Ntino is a wee more innocent. If coral reefs could be a dead organ then maybe someone else could have a transformation themed after them. I appreciate the feedback.