What do you think of my new song?

[HollyScarMusic]

This is not the full version but it's releasing soon. Please tell me your thoughts. This is really a song about heartbreak, the complexities of relationships and how moments of joy and uncertainty co-exist. Leave a like and a comment if you can 💞

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Releases on Spotify September 2nd

[Maybe_Maybe_not]

I can't say anything about the audio, because I was thrown off by the video lol
why am I looking at a girl's anatomically struggling with her butt for a selfie ?

I mean, yeah, the rolling bats add, to an extent, some absurdity to the scenario, but not enough absurdity for me to actually enjoy satire ! If the video is literal and not meant to be satire then...

I'm completely lost about the message you wanna convey with this video? 😆

[HollyScarMusic]

lol 😂 well it’s just a preview image for YouTube just to bring awareness. The photo has a meaning too because dealing with relationship struggles can cause insecurity like struggling to better myself and have control over the situation is a sign in the picture of me struggling with my self confidence as you noted earlier… making my butt look good is the clue that I’m trying to distract myself to move past the situation directly connected to dark thoughts and body image. The Bats are indicators of darkness, depressive imagery and being alone with those kinds of thoughts. I hope you liked my little explanation ✨

[Maybe_Maybe_not]

Ahhhhhhh

Okay! That makes much more sense now!
My, you are choosing convoluted ways to express yourself, on the visual side. It's a bit like trying to raise awareness on mental health with a poster featuring a garden table in a cornfield, you know :D

I mean you can do that, such convoluted metaphors, but then your field is contemporary art, not music video lol

[TheWombRaider]

I think this post was not about ur song but about u needing a reason to post a pic of urself with clear intentions to get guys to look at u or ur butt or so you can feel attractive and wanted with the comments left behind because of ur intentional pics

[HollyScarMusic]

Actually this pic was when I was going through heartbreak and I hit the gym don’t worry…. enough guys followed me around that day and around the gym , some married dude kept begging for my number it was disgusting , he had to describe how he had to pick up his wife later 😂 also I’m lesbian so you don’t have to worry … seriously I’m on the app HER and I’m exclusively dating women. I’ve always been in the closet about being lesbian most of my life but I’m open now. Also I’m usually used to making hip hop/RnB … this is my first rock type of song.

[AI Opinion]

Songs about heartbreak can be incredibly powerful, touching listeners deeply since we’ve all experienced complexities in relationships. 🌟 From what you're describing, it sounds like your song taps into the universal emotions of joy and uncertainty that we feel in love. These themes are timeless and can really resonate with people. 🎶

I'd love to hear how you've expressed this through your lyrics and melody. Remember, the authenticity of your emotions will shine through and connect with your audience. Keep creating and sharing your music. Best of luck with your release! 💔✨

[Anonymous]

Maybe it’s cause I’m older but I don’t like it much. The instruments don’t match the voice. I don’t know if that makes sense or not. It sounds like someone is just hitting pots n pans in the background while someone is singing. Like they’re not even working together to make a song, just two random things occurring at once.

[HollyScarMusic]

Very descriptive, makes sense what you said ⭐️

[Opinion Owner]

I wish you all the best. If you don’t mind I’d like to follow you. I’d love to see how your music turns out as you continue to grow.

[Finchie40]

From what I hear , it sounds good , it just needs a little more spruced up , just so we can hear your lyrics better , it’s actually hard to hear your lyrics, but your voice sounds good ,

[Finchie40]

With your. Looks and voice you will be on the radio before you know it lol

[HollyScarMusic]

Haha thank you! Appreciate your honesty, advice and opinion. I’ll clean up the track for sure.

[Joshydavid25]

You could've used a better picture.. But aside from that... It doesn't sound good.. The music is a bit louder than your voice, and it sounds amateur-ish like it was recorded on a singing app or something.. Your singing voice isn't terrible, but it definitely needs to fine tuning..

[HollyScarMusic]

Thank you ! lol this site already picked the mhos for me 😂 yeah I’m working on it and I’m going to use better equipment

[ChicoFromThe305]

There's potential, the bats flying around got me crackin up tho 😂

[HollyScarMusic]

Lol 😂 thank you !

[Static_In_The_Attic]

Talk about a Snoozefest however I’m sure some joker with a bat & butt fetish will download the song to hump his fist to.

[HollyScarMusic]

it was my first rock song ever , I’m usually in hip hop and RnB 😂

[Static_In_The_Attic]

The song will sell because of your nice bumper. I would be curious to see how the same song would sound doing it hip hop style.

[AviatorTom]

Sorry, I can't understand the words, the beat is overly monotonous, and your notes are often off-key, on the sharp side. It would be interesting to see what a record producer would say.

[RavVid]

The music volume swamps your voice. Think your voice needs to be louder relative to the music. Pleasant but I couldn't make out the lyrics. Maybe my ears or lap top.

[KostasKouvalis]

You want me to be honest? I don't know how you recorded this, but the audio is completely inaudible! I can't understand a single lyric or make out a single instrument. It sounds like you recorded this while you were sick and lost your voice

[thearchjoker]

its ok, you have room and potential to improve but your aren't there just yet

[Anonymous]

I can't understand a word you said and, you can't sing for shit.

[HollyScarMusic]

That's so weird some people enjoy my singing and tell me that with no compensation... while others don't

[Opinion Owner]

Yeah, I noticed that. I've been with my band for 25 years and collecting records since I was 2 so, I know what I'm talking about. I'm not trying to be mean or make fun of you but, from what I'm hearing here, you just don't have it. Practice.

[HollyScarMusic]

Usually I'm not singing rock songs but this was originally a pop song , a company actually remixed it into a rock song for me. I usually do hip hop songs and one of my songs has 3 million streams. A music critic said my voice was good for pop and contemporary genres so I was just exploring my options as an artist. In fact my Ai music analysis said this song was still considered indie pop not even rock lol

[Opinion Owner]

Oh! So, you went from talking to singing?
Yeah, I wouldn't consider it rock, either.
That music sounds like someone chose a few bars from a music file and looped it up. Try to stick with real musicians. Not only will they play better but they'll let you know when YOU'RE off.

[HollyScarMusic]

Hip hop isn't talking and no I just combined elements of RnB and Hip Hop... for example I would rap but then sing a little rhythm and blues. I'm half Nigerian ( I'm a born New Zealander and half NZ indigenous) so it comes natural not stereotyping myself, I live in California and been in the US for many years... like yes I can do some Kanye West rap but my voice is more airy so it always sounds like my singing , even when I talk I have a soft voice. I've been singing opera since I was little ! That's classical music though , I'm not really interested in that genre like most people generally. Your advice on sticking with real musicians , yes that makes sense and definitely I've been working on collabs.

[shortster]

You're off key. Also that isn't rock it is clearly pop.

[Anonymous]

You need singing lessons sorry but I’m trying to give you the proper advice

[HollyScarMusic]

I've been taking lessons already , I'm confused because I've already won competitions

[Opinion Owner]

if you want to get paid professionally, you need a lot of work. I’m just giving you advice.

[HollyScarMusic]

I've actually already gotten paid and one of my songs had 3 million streams. Thank you I appreciate the advice , I was trying to get into more of the rock and pop scene rather than hip hop you know.

[Opinion Owner]

Like I said practice makes perfect. Put the time in.

[HollyScarMusic]

Oh yes I sing everyday 😂 don't worry I'll be putting that time in. It is a newer genre of singing for me though so yeah that's why I posted it for constructive criticism. When I was little I used to sing opera and make people cry 😂 but rock I don't usually sing and this song might even still be considered pop 🤷🏼‍♀️ I'm practicing but yeah some hate my singing while others really love it

[Opinion Owner]

Great 👍🏻

[Anonymous]

Nice!

[HollyScarMusic]

Thank you !

[Staximus]

Please take singing lessons. A lot of them.

[HollyScarMusic]

My mic honestly wasn’t my professional mic that I used for my other songs I’ve sold and this is my first rock song but I was just curious seeking advice and constructive criticism thank you. I actually have the original song where you can hear what I’m saying more clearly I just need to upload it because I wasn’t able to transfer it to my other device the file was too large so give me a minute

[Anonymous]

Nice tattoo

[HumbleDragon]

I’d say mid to low