What do you think of my speech?

[trina_x]

hi lol not been on for awhile but remember the vice chair election can i please get opinions on the speech i wrote also any adaptations you guys might make

My election speech

also if you're aged between 11-24 could you help me improve my statistics by filling out this form https://forms.gle/Yw4ZKShn5BsAFwRbA

thanks for anything :DDDD

[SnowedIn]

Ms. Trina this is an excellent speech! Very well done. I was a speechwriter in the U. S. for 18 years and you've produced an excellent speech. It flows well, it is genuine, it is passionate. It is very clear what you want, what you think, what you're advocating for, and what you'll do -- all vital to political remarks.

Be proud of this! Really well done!

You don't have to be a fan of President Obama, but this speech that he gave to the British Parliament in May 2011 is well worth watching. It is a masterwork of rhetoric, both Speaker Bercow's introduction, the President's opening and joke, and the remainder of the address.

https://www.youtube.com/embed/fp85zRg2cwg

[Anonymous]

I had a great time filling out the youth survey…until I realized it was for people 15-25 years younger than me.