Is This Message Bad?

[Anonymous]

Hello, I'm trying to message this girl and wondering if it's bad and I need to change it.

This is fine to send her

No, it's bad

[DaisyM23]

Don’t need to add in the last bits about college and where you’re being stationed in the first message

[redrasberry21]

Don’t put location, just say hey I saw your account on here, I just thought you were really pretty and had to send you a message. The rest is fine! Definitely don’t put location lol

[redrasberry21]

Also you can put the air force part but just instead of college stuff just ask her how are you?

[Gertrude_Awonk]

I think you’re giving too much information about yourself at once. Cut off the last sentence and I think it’s fine

[Wisdom-Strength-Love]

location part gave a vibe that may be controversial

[Ally247]

You don’t need to give her your life story

[iseekpinetrees]

Delete everything after 19.

[NathanDavis]

"uhh" skip that part as well.

[Wise4myage]

Make it more brief and add some humor.