Guys help me with my grammar?

[Anonymous]

Message: To all Rank 4 there wil be a rotation of titles so different title for each officer daily And everyone has a chance to see who's online and everyone got a help from buff title.

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To All Rank 4 we will do a rotation of titles. So everyone has a chance to see whos online and everyone got a help from buff title.

[shortster]

Message: To all Rank 4 members, there wil be a rotation of titles; so a different title for each officer daily. This way everyone has a chance to see who's online and everyone gets help from the title buff.


English was never my best subject in school; but I think that is right.

[Asker]

Thank you 😊

[shortster]

You're welcome