I am trying to write better into message on dating sites?

[Kev9444]

For a intro message I sent
Hi, Hope all is well, I am a shy introvert and trying to put myself out there more and getting to know new people.
How about yourself?
What hobbies or interests are you into?
And I ask them a question or two from info in their profile.

I am asking for some help on how I could improve it.

[Anonymous]

I wouldn't waste my time. I say "hi" and that's it. Any woman that expects me to dance for her interest can stay single. Clearly it's working as she's on a dating website. 🤣🤣🤣