What do you think of these Chuck Berry inspired lyrics I wrote a couple nights ago?

Anonymous
There’s so many things I wanna say to youAnd I don’t know where to start
After all that you put me through
We’d be better off apart

So bye bye bye, It’s time to go
Enjoy your broken heart
Now close your eyes, breathe in through your nose
Mmm, you can smell my fart!

Breathe it in real deeply
It’s my parting gift to you
Smell so bad, you’ll be weeping
Yeah that’s what I want to do

You say it’s vile and disgusting
But I just laugh and say nothing
Nothing, that is, except
Mmm, you can smell my fart!
You can smell my fart!
You can smell my fart!
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What do you think of these Chuck Berry inspired lyrics I wrote a couple nights ago?
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