This is my story with a girl, what do you think about this? Sorry this is a long story?

I decided wirte my story wit ha girl, I'd like know your opinions. What did I do wrong? What did I do well? I'd like learn from my mistakes and act well in the future.
This is my story with a girl, what do you think about this? Sorry this is a long story?
This is my story with a girl, what do you think about this? Sorry this is a long story?
This is my story with a girl, what do you think about this? Sorry this is a long story?
This is my story with a girl, what do you think about this? Sorry this is a long story?
This is my story with a girl, what do you think about this? Sorry this is a long story?
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