What can I do to improve my video quality?

[Anonymous]

Any criticism would be helpful even if I don't want to hear it I'd appreciate any help in improving it

[Caunsos]

It sound like game music was peaking. I assume this was a vod of a live stream that broken due to the lack of intro. The other thing is you commentary skills and that something comes with time. You look at anyone's early videos that their commentary is a bit lacking.

[Asker]

Yah the first part of it glitched out really bad like the game itself so I had to restart it. Yah I'm not very good at speaking in general.

[Caunsos]

Also use something like audacity to record you mic/commentary and your screen capture software to record the game audio. This lets you adjust the audio levels in the edit.