Is my video better than before?

[Apulu_Imback]

So this time I tried few suggestions you guys gave me in my previous post :
How to improve in YouTube?

And this is my second video I tried the suggestions with :

So is this any better from the previous one?
https://youtube.com/shorts/md4c1Lv2tjc?feature=share

How to improve more after this?

[AlanJ17M4F]

@Apulu_Imback I didn't see the first one, but this one looked great. Clear , not too close but not too far away either. Are trying to get into filming, or movies or what?

[Apulu_Imback]

I shared the link of my first video below. Not really, yes getting in film industry is one thing which I would love to but not really my main goal. This channel is for my writing. I have passion for writing and Music. If through music I become an celebrity then I may consider getting into film industry. Not gonna happen probably anyways.

[bowenw]

They are both good. If I had to chose I would say I like the older one better.

[Apulu_Imback]

Ah I see, I guess it was a bit too much. I will try making it simple next time.

[bowenw]

Don't change anything. They are both excellent.

[Apulu_Imback]

Thanks a lot then :)

[bowenw]

Thank you for the MHO. 😊

[Apulu_Imback]

Even though I didn't gave, you're welcome anyways.

[bowenw]

Thanks anyway. It must have been assigned by the system.

[Apulu_Imback]

Yes, it happens when you don't choose the MHO. I forgot about this post haha.

[bowenw]

Lucky for me you forgot. 🤣

[Apulu_Imback]

I would have chosen you anyways lol.

[bowenw]

You are too kind.

[Apulu_Imback]

I'm not too kind. I'm just how an ideal human should be. The world only became so bitter that average is considered sweet now.

[bowenw]

That's a good point.

[Apulu_Imback]

Yes, you are also an average human like me. Just see the difference between us and the bitterness of world.

[bowenw]

There is a lot of bitterness out there.

[Apulu_Imback]

Yes, it looks really bitter from up. It is our luck thay we were not contaminated with this disease.

[bowenw]

Yes we are very fortunate.

[Babygirl_S]

Beautiful video despite a few grammatical errors. What is your channel about?

[Apulu_Imback]

About poems

[Babygirl_S]

That's great!

[Cubus]

I wanted to ask why your name was "Black Apple" but I see you changed it.

[Apulu_Imback]

Well I have many such names haha. Black Apple, Black Diamond Apple, Diamond Apple. These three are like my stage or pen name you can say. I didn't liked Black Apple and my original pen name is Diamond Apple so I changed.

[Dinosaursandanime65]

This is what romance animes try- wish they could be. Very well done

[Apulu_Imback]

Thanks a lot!

[Dinosaursandanime65]

No problem bruddah

[serious]

Yes it is better than before.

[Apulu_Imback]

Thanks for your opinion