Did I edit this video well or is it not good enough?

[CoolCatMar1]

I feel like maybe the song doesn't suit the vibe lol... I am watching all my videos and i kinda feel like some videos would be better with a different sound on.

I know i am not some pro editor i am just asking because i really like posting bullshit these days in general i am bored😂😂

[ZXCwWRQWz]

I'm thinking the cut at 0:02 is jarring but maybe only because you drew my attention to it. I'm thinking a short transition there might help. I do something like the quick cut at 0:15. But I'm thinking you can ease it by a quarter of a second or so.

[AngryCarl2]

The editing seems okay. I wasn't paying much attention to the music, which is just meh for me.

[CoolCatMar1]

I actually like this song

[AngryCarl2]

Well then good :)

[Ms_Facesitter]

I wouldn't have added the second part with him. The first one alone was enough, he looked more "dreamy" there, you know?

[CoolCatMar1]

Oh i understand what you mean !!! Thanks

[BCRanger10]

Not bad, but depending on what your intent is, I'd recommend adding more and shorter clips.

[Sparkie460]

I think you did a great job. I don't even know how to do that stuff.

[bowenw]

It's very good. You did great.

[CoolCatMar1]

Thanks! by the way me posting bs all the time😂

[bowenw]

😂 🤣 😂 🤣 😂
It's actually is good.

[CoolCatMar1]

Thanks

[Billlewis]

Yes, ma'am, it's just fantastic.

[Billlewis]

This breathtakingly beautiful Hellenic Goddess has hopelessly captivated me beyond belief, and she's got me in the palm of her hand... I'm so grateful for her presence, and the steamy posts and videos of her... how can anyone be so devastatingly gorgeous...

[Christoff92]

It's great 😀