Is my rap song bad or good?

[Poobutt711]

It's a fat song about food for all the fat people out there

The delivery was kind of shitty, because it was a first attempt... I wil re record a better version tommorowBut is it good as in the beat, flow, and lyrics?

Bad

Good

Eh

[MCheetah]

You sound like a 13 year old Shy-guy. No energy or soul in it, at all. The lyrics are "Eh." The beat is simple, but also sounds depressing.

This was horrible, to be honest. Please don't do this to us again. I'd be nicer, but you clearly didn't even try, here. You are trolling us.

Also, there's already songs like this.

https://www.youtube.com/embed/nKO43xG66OIhttps://www.youtube.com/embed/oLJlfwZ-xZ8https://www.youtube.com/embed/libJVYDUxXo

[Poobutt711]

Fair review but I don't think that beat is depressing at all

It's the opposite lol

[MCheetah]

It sounds like 1pm on a Thursday after a stoner just got fired from his job at Burger King...
A late 90s/early 2000s stoner beat. Like it's from Half-Baked or Jay and Silent Bob or something.

[Poobutt711]

Oh lol maybe that why I love it cos I have the mentality of a lazy stoner my whole life lol

[Poobutt711]

Also the older sounding it is the better, early 90s is my favourite kind of rap

[jforn02]

I think you don't sound confident in your rapping. Some of the lyrics are questionable but it isn't too bad. The lines don't flow through the song, there is a break in between them. It is good for a first rap tho. I think u just need experience really.

[tatianamay]

As @mcheetah said, depressing beat. Sing louder bruh. You sound like the quiet kid in my elementary school whose voice was like so damn low.

No offense, but you could do a lot better. Sorry if i was rude, but this needed to be said.

[Poobutt711]

What? Why is people saying the beat is depression? Lol, my brain must be wired different or something cos to me it's the most happy up beat I've ever heard, and I don't even care if it is simple. Not sounds fire to me,

But ok yes I will try to rap louder... Actually I thought I was rapping too loud here but IL try to do a better take

[Poobutt711]

It sounds fire to me*

[tatianamay]

The rap could be more upbeat. I mean, i dont wanna fall asleep. Its not a lullaby

[Poobutt711]

I thought the flow of it and beat sounded kind of cool and interesting. But I guess when we view anything from ourselves it's view through a different lense. That's why I asked this.

Thanks for the honest feedback. IL just delete it

[Iron_Man]

It’s good

[Poobutt711]

Thanks ☺️

[Iron_Man]

You are welcome

[Anonymous]

It's OK