Is this Comic Book Villain too much?

[Wade12345]

This is the "final boss" of my first comic book, if I ever get it into a form worthy to be published.

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Graam: The Ethereal

Age: 30,000 years

Male

6ft tall.

Class 4 Ethereal Mutant

Abilities:

-Permanent Etherealness.

-Immortality

-Ability to copy any other mutant ability with 50% efficiency.

-Reality Anchor: Freeze some beings in time with Warp Speed.

-Ethereal Swords

-Geomagnetic Storm, disabling all electronic technology.

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All of the heroes and some of the other villains will team up to beat him.

Too Much

About Right

Make Him even Stronger!

[MAC1983]

What first came to mind was:
OK, he's making a supervillain... Just to read you were making exactly that.

I really like comics/graphic novels/sequential art/mangá whatever you want to call it so I commend you for doing your own.

I voted Too much because I think you might (BIG empashis on might, since I don't know your script) have written yourself into a corner.

For example: 100% ethereal. That's not necessarily bad, at all, could be very cool, but how many of the heroes you want to pit against him are useless because of that? Let's think of a big house example: Only The Martian in the Justice League would be of any use against him in that entire group, maybe? Doesn't that limit your options?

Play with strengths and weaknesses, and allow yourself to figure things as you go along.

When it's done send me the link in a DM even if you found my "advice" utterly useless. I'd like to read it... Keep on making them! 👍🏻

[Wade12345]

Of the six most powerful heroes who will confront Graam, only two would be "useless", but I could have them arm themselves with energy weapons.

[MAC1983]

I see. Sure!
Looking forward to that link, Wade.

[Wade12345]

six main heroes to confront Graam during the final battle:

Kristen Lentz (water elementalist)
Rock Having (Earth Elementalist)
Specter/ Rio Aso ( multiples mutant girl)
Jonathan Tanner (Chrononaut)
Madeline Tanner (Phasing, Invention)
Ayxa Alexandra (Zero Point Energy)

Villains who might team up against Graam:
Gregory Glover/Tentacle (Unstable mutant)
unknown yet.

Basically, a class 4 mutant is up to ten times more powerful than a class 3 mutant. The scale is logarithmic.