Yvridio Vaseilio Concept Comic leaks?

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Here’s a wee sneaky peak at the series. The one with the dinosaurs is the intro when it FIRST starts and the other one is part of Full Picture.

Here are these to get a better idea of how it will actually look

[jennifer_bloom]

You are a very good artist, I only have a few suggestions: One is that you use straighter boxes and smaller frames or no frames at all and simple line divisions and the other is that you sometimes combine multiple boxes into a single image to show close ups of what you want to do because it’s your details that make you stand out. Also that you use formal text styles or more aesthetically pleasing letters and lastly, that the words appear in different places in the comic box and not all in one place at the top of the page. Also that you use a separate white colour for the text for at least 80% of the text you write and that you make sure your colour choice does not interfere with your text readability. Would also try to personalize the dinosaurs by giving them human characteristics and descriptions because people only care about animals when they resemble people.

[Dinosaursandanime65]

I don’t like cartoony Disney styled looking animals. Doesn’t feel in any way natural and is overrated, like being human. That kinda says relatively a lot about that person if they only cares about animals with eyes bigger than their stomachs. The only reason why these “comics” are poor quality is because they’re just rough drafts. Suggestions still taken into consideration though

[Dinosaursandanime65]

The official versions won’t have text at the top, only dialogue from the people

[jennifer_bloom]

Oh that is cool that you have your own style

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Of course

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Though, I will number each frame

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Or panel or whatever it’s called

[Dinosaursandanime65]

I updated it a wee bit

[Guy13]

Watch someone from internet don’t steal your work..

[Dinosaursandanime65]

No need to worry, I post on Deviantart and it claims my art is protected. Besides, my existence is all the proof I need to make it clear that I own this

[Dinosaursandanime65]

If I ever have to, I could spoil this series future by asking the b*tch trick questions like, “who is the most powerful person in ALL of Yvridio Vaseilio?”

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Unless they’ve seen SS5+ or I don’t even get there yet, then they’d probably say it’s Jahnazu but NOOOOOO NO NOOOO THE ANSWER IS CUCUMBER-

[Guy13]

okay... good. China and all its industries steals and remakes everything... from Apple on.

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Well someone better pick up the phone