Sneaky Peak at Yvridio Vaseilio book 1?

[Dinosaursandanime65]

What do you think so far?

[SnowedIn]

Dang! Soooooooooo good!

[jennifer_bloom]

Your comic is good but the shading looks rushed. Maybe that is intentional but I prefer a more painted or full bodied chrome experience. The other thing is the colour choice, I believe using media tricks get you more sales such as complimentary colours or colours that reflect a certain theme. One thing I like about your art is you use different degrees of the same pigment in each comic so in some places the blue is darker and in others it is lighter, I think this is a smart choice. I would use a more formal medium cause pencil crown seems casual and undersized.

[Dinosaursandanime65]

Those light spots on the Albertosaurus is supposed to be light going though the trees

[Dinosaursandanime65]

I’m sure you’ll feel better when I print the pages in ink form

[jennifer_bloom]

I made the comment I did because blue is a colour people associate with inanimate objects and using it on a life form seems too fantastical for me. Like I believe warm colours should be used on living creatures or the thing will seem too fictional and hypothetical.

[Dinosaursandanime65]

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[Dinosaursandanime65]

Those look alive to me. Oh and they came from dinosaurs so it’s not this is rebonkulous.

[jennifer_bloom]

Those parrots are adorable!