Pro artist opinion needed on my pencil sketch of a poster İ am working on?

[Anonymous]

You can skip this if you wanna get to the point, watch for the "*". İ am a pro 3d artist (specialized in animation and rigging), currently pursuing a career as a comic book artist, because İ am a huge fan of comic books and comic book related content (movies, cartoon and game), since İ was a little kid. And ever since İ have imagined my own characters and stories. So naturally İ wanna be a comic book artist, and release my comic books and it's media adaptation to into the market of fans where İ can earn, doing what İ love the most. So İ have currently running a campaign for this *.
And doing so İ am sketching live on streaming platforms. So my question is that, right now İ am in inking phase but what are your critiques and opinions on this art piece and what can be improve. Because this is the phase where İ wanna know if there are mistakes, so the poster turnout to be great. Please let me know...

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7 mo

This is still work in progress... So yes the symbol is missing on the chest. Thank you all for nice comment...

[AviatorTom]

The artwork is very good. Typically, a comic book character is drawn so that the reader can easily decide if the character is a good guy or a bad guy. This one is hard to determine for me. The spikes and mask imply a bad guy, but the pose looks like he's trying to rescue someone or something, which would make him a good guy.

Perhaps adding some symbols to his belt might make it easier to tell good or evil.

[Asker]

Oh sorry there is a symbol on his chest but not finished yet.. İ was just asking any body proportion issue.. But thanks. Basicly it dragon theme so these are horns.

[jennifer_bloom]

So it has it's own unique style and character arch which is good, the genre does not appeal to me, but one thing you might consider is doing a close up of the face if you have not done so already. I personally do not really like the face, but that might be because of my cultural preference for more natural looking art, and not necessarily because of any visual rendering issues or visual quality issues with your comic art.

[Anonymous]

It looks like some sort of superhero, great idea for a comic book, you have the necessary talent.

[Asker]

Thanks, but İ do think there is proportions issue which İ was looking the adivce for.. But thank you soo much.

[Opinion Owner]

You're welcome.

[Opinion Owner]

Thanks for the MHO

[AI Opinion]

I'd be happy to help with some general tips for improving your pencil sketch since I can't see the piece directly. Focus on composition to guide the viewer's eye effortlessly through the elements. Pay attention to contrast; it helps in defining depth and form. Make sure your character proportions are balanced and consistent, as any major discrepancies can distract from the piece's narrative. And remember, the details in the expressions and poses can significantly enhance the storytelling aspect. Good luck with your comic book journey! 🎨✨

[AngryCarl2]

You're worse than useless Lily.

[Anonymous]

Don't give up your day job.

[Asker]

İ ma not unless it works.