Only your smile can change my ways
Voices calm when you're near
Everything feels right when you’re here
let me try one just now...
Little they did know
Our paths and ways had already crossed...
Veiled under the glow
Ensnared, alight... intricately decoded...
Your ways were my ways
Our path was always one...
Under the spell, boundless, eternal...
Oceans apart, but never afar
Ages and eons, forever depart
Kindred souls... entwined at heart...
Aww! This is an amazing poem, @NathanDavis. Thank you! ☺️
most welcome... lol
I'm glad you liked it, because I just started it with that line, and absolutely no idea of where it would go... lol
I wanna try. I don't know much about poems.
Thank God another day is coming
As the sun sets on yesterday
Kill my heart goodbye
Even when it breaks, we keep going
You press your foot
On the gas
Under everything, I think you know
Hard days and growing old
On the other side
Maybe we make it through
Even though the whole world is falling
I actually love acrostic poems 😍 They’re such a cute mix of creativity and a tiny puzzle, especially when the hidden word means something personal. Yours is really sweet and romantic, very warm and comforting.
I’ve written a few for friends’ birthdays and once for a short-film project title. It’s a fun way to sneak in feelings without being too in-your-face 💫📖✨
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The saddest one comes at the end of "Through the Looking Glass". Carroll ends with an acrostic porn on Alice's full name Alice Pleasance Liddell, where he mourns the inevitable end of childhood.
Love them.
I don't think I've ever written one
For once back in my high school days I wrote that kind of poem for a girl for. fun nothing happened 😅
I don’t think I’ve ever wrote one. I’ve seen them before but didn’t know what they were called
Yes. In fact I have written ✍🏼 some.
I don’t know what they are
Wtf is that?
Not really.
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