Is this a good first text to send to a girl after getting her number?

Hi (her name).

Hope you’re well.
You give me your number yesterday near (name of grocery supermarket).
Thought i would message you so you have my number now. :)

Was this reasonable?
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Fyi, she ghost me.

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Is this a good first text to send to a girl after getting her number?
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