Guys, vote on this dating profile summary and if you think you can do better (I'm not a guy, I don't know how you think) kindly rewrite it?

[Anonymous]

Things about children, etc. is elsewhere in the summary

Friends describe me as honest, intelligent, friendly / easygoing, thoughtful / generous, and family orientated. With a great sense of humor, I love to laugh.

Curious I love learning about different cultures and trying new things.

Growing up between country and city, I enjoy the outdoors (hiking, camping, etc.), theatres, festivals, art galleries, and more.

Financially secure, own my house, I am seeking someone who laughs at themselves and believes in monogamy, openness, and communication.

Very Good

Good

Maybe Good

Not Good

[LikeALog]

This is more what I expected to see. It's my style of doing profiles so it's probably not your personality. I intentionally omitted the house as it would likely attract undesirables.


My friends describe me as being honest, intelligent, friendly, easygoing, thoughtful, and family orientated. I'm told I have a great sense of humor and I love to laugh.

I enjoy many activities: learning about different cultures, trying new things, the outdoors (lIke hiking and camping), theatres, festivals and art galleries.

Do you like similar activities? Are you someone who laughs at themselves and believes in monogamy, openness, and communication? If you do, let's chat.

[FreedMan]

I'd just add that because you're seeking someone who values monogamy highlight that you do to. I know that seems like it should be a given but it's not anymore. Same with the openness and communication.

[H8INCHES]

I enjoy the outdoors (hiking, camping, etc.), theatres, festivals, art galleries, and I love to laugh.

Financially secure, you should be too. No man children please.

I am seeking someone who laughs at themselves and believes in complete monogamy as I do, and 2 way communication.

You have too much in there that is vague.. like the word 'openness'. That word should not be included, because he may think 'open relationship', or 'open to BDSM', or any number of things. Same with "trying new things" ... be specific or leave it out. And nobody cares about 'learning other cultures' as a dating bullet point. No guy cares about what your friends say about you either. He knows they would lie to you or for you. Saying what you have, like a house, sets you up for scammers to come hard at you. There are more fake than real people on those sites.

The biggest piece of advice I can give is don't try to date UP. If you are a 6-7, you should be looking at 5-6 guys and maybe a 7. But if you try to shoot for a 8-10 and think you will be with him forever. You will just be used until he finds a 9-10.

[Asker]

ROFL. I don't CARE for looks. MORONS care for looks. Looks fade, etc.

If someone's a 10 and has the intelligence of a slug he'll be more worthless to me than that slug.