Guys, what do you think if you read this on a girl's facebook profile?

[Anonymous]

Growing up between country and city life I got the best of both worlds.
From being so close to wild wolves hiking in the Rockies I could've touched one to working with a Shakespearean actress of 30 years experience.

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Is it too much, should I change something? I mean I used to fly airplanes too (cessnas).

I am very family oritneated. I'm actually 33 and my parents both disabled live with me (I own the house, it's my investment).

[Jacobbbb]

Maybe remove the second part. A lot of fb profiles I see have hardly anything in the bio, like less than 20 words. It's not weird or anything just unusual to have that much there if it makes sense. But it's creative I'll say that, not in a bad way

[Anonymous]

Baby no one cares about FB bio..
But it's good to write this... you're awesome

[Guy13]

Too wordy

[Asker]

How it's less than 100 words.

[Asker]

It's 40 words. And it's "too wordy"? Wth.

[Guy13]

Heart in Country and Hills but Life in City ⁉️

[Asker]

What? It's very clear what I said. And last I checked Shakespearean actors are about as far from the hills & country as we're from mars.

[Guy13]

Whatever go with it

[Asker]

You make absolutely no sense whatsoever. Are you drunk or high or something?