So I'm trying to decide what to do for the blurb aka words on the back of the book?

[lucyvoid]

How is this obviously this would have correct spelling grammar and punctuation this is just me deciding what it should say.

"He took my life now he will pay with his. In this shattered burning world I shall be it's heartless Queen and his destruction. Blood locked me away now blood will set me free. So tell me child is truth really what you seek?

[WhitneySnow]

“He took my life; now he will pay with his. In this shattered burning world, I shall be its queen and his destruction. Blood locked me away; now blood will set me free. So tell me, child: is truth what you really seek?”

[lucyvoid]

Umm I wasn't asking you to correct it I know it's done wrong it's the concept not the literal thing

[WhitneySnow]

Oh ok. It sounds kind of cliched, but I would need to know more about the book to make any suggestions.

[princeofromance]

I would hate to be on your bad side.

[lucyvoid]

Um why?

[princeofromance]

Those words sound like you have been scorned by a lover and are out for revenge.