Echoes of Emptiness

[Anonymous]

A message from him/her to a forgotten person

I still remember the lies you told, each one slipping past your lips so easily, as if I meant nothing to you. You betrayed me in ways I never imagined, pretending everything was fine while all along, you were hiding your deceit. The trust we built, shattered in an instant, and now, when I look back at the times we shared, it only brings a bitter emptiness. You made me believe in something real, only to tear it apart without a second thought. But now, I’ve reached a point where there’s nothing left. No anger, no hurt, just an absence of emotion. The pain has faded, and all that's left is a cold indifference toward you. I don’t feel anything anymore—not love, not resentment. Just nothing. You’re a stranger to me now, and that's the way I’ve learned to keep it.

[DishLady]

Deep! I love it! You should publish some of your poems and short narratives for real…

[myTake Owner]

🩷🩷

[red-lipstick-girl]

I loved it, it was very nice

[myTake Owner]

Thank you

[Jay-_-]

Exactly, it's like a hole in the heart 🕳. Beautifully written by the way. 🙏🏼Props

[myTake Owner]

Thank you🩷

[exitseven]

I hope that as you write these it helps make the pain go away.

[myTake Owner]

I don't feel anything anymore

[exitseven]

Thanks for the MHO

[exitseven]

You still feel the vacuum

[moneymagnet24]

I gave you more than I gave myself,
So loyal to you that I betrayed myself. 🥺🥺

[myTake Owner]

Very nice and sad

[Uglygaypoorcoward94]

Nice poem.

[myTake Owner]

Thanks

[Uglygaypoorcoward94]

That was sarcasm lol

[myTake Owner]

You are a very bad at sarcasm lol

[Uglygaypoorcoward94]

Ok well im terrible at a lot of things

[myTake Owner]

Apparently

[Uglygaypoorcoward94]

But im great at being spoken down to

[myTake Owner]

Huh?

[Uglygaypoorcoward94]

Me llamo maricon