Is this a good introduction speech about myself?

[Lex201214]

Yes

No

[lightbulb27]

you mean for GAG or school or what? Lots of edits above of course.
I've been to samep laces, but darn it, I missed dollywood cinnamon bread... I did love those mountains!

I think this is really about where you've been and that you like travel and adventure. It doesn't say a lot about you, who you are, what you feel, where you are at as a person, asperations, likes dislikes, beliefs. Maybe you don't want to share that and that's fine. I also don't know if is your real name, I don't like using real names out here for security reasons cause we don't know everyone.

[CalvinM]

I think it's okay, I have a lot of critiques, is this your final edit?

[PeterB1517]

No, not really. Lots of travel tangents and not much about you

[Swimmerdude2013]

I think it's a good intro. Also talk about what your hobbies are, sports you do etc.