Can I get your opinion on my pof (dating site) summary?

[Anonymous]

Is it good, any tips for improvement also does it even make a difference what you write on your summary. Like will a girl feel more inclined to respond to your message if your bio is good?

A good summary matters

Doesn't matter

Updates

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Here's the updated version any better? The first sentence has a quoat from the bay area legend e40
Born and raised bay area native, dancing on top of chariots and turning tight ones. Introverted at heart I could enjoy a night of binge watching my favorite series but still have a blast going on a spontaneous adventure.
I enjoy back road car rides driving to viewpoints and star gazing. This summer I was island hopping the beaches of Thailand, next I want to experience the night life of ibiza.

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I also lift the last couple sentences from my original summary I just couldn't fit it all in the first update

[spqreid]

It's a decent profile but sadly girls are not humble, interesting and normal. If you portrait a false self then the girls will come flocking as they do on social media as online dating is nothing more than an extension of social media. Meaning you need to take vanity pictures to express a false confidence. You need to take images in clubs holding bottles to portray a false social life. You need to take images of labels that you can't afford to portray false wealth. Only then will she be interested. Because as soon as you swop social media profiles she can show your profile to friends putting her in a higher social standing. If the guy works hard, loves his family, saves his money, goes camping. There is no glamour to that so they prefer the false self.

[Asker]

Well I do have pictures similar to that but they're on my ig not my profile. Also if I talk about materialistic things like that on my profile wouldn't that make me sound cocky and shallow

[spqreid]

Sadly that's what girls like today. They flock to this type then the 'fuck boy - there are no decent men' saga continues.

[CuriousMufuxka]

It seems too automated.. Eh doesn't really matter anyway, the success will be through you talking to other girls there. My advice is to get their number or suggest one of those text apps that gives an independent number.. If things click, then use your actual number to call and ask her out on a date.

[Asker]

I usually ask for her snapchat between the 3rd or 5th message. I like snapchat because you could send pictures also that way you could make sure she's real

[CuriousMufuxka]

Godspeed young knight.

[Asker]

Lol what

[CuriousMufuxka]

Good luck young man.

[Asker]

Oh ok thanks

[PinkMichae]

Only thing to fix is aliens is spelled wrong. But it makes you sound fun and adventurous.😎

[Asker]

Oh yea thanks for pointing that out lol

[PinkMichae]

Np.😁

[Shoenron]

It's boring and generic, that could be said by 1000 other folks out there, does not say anything specific about you.
Put something personal, not something trying to appeal to the most, on the contrary and don't make it seems like you're trying hard.

[Asker]

But that's what I like to do for fun 😕 and the personal stuff I rather save that if we meet in person.

[Asker]

What would you write

[Shoenron]

I usually wright something short, an in - joke/reference about some of my interest that only people with same interest would get (no quotes), something really personal but that doesn't matter that much, a witty comment about some news showing my view on it.

If that's what you like to do, try to be more specific : "Do you have hiking shoes? I prefer mountains over forests"

Something true about you that make you special to them and that would make them feel special to you if you share the same interest.

[ENTP_EMO]

Don't write 100%. Put 69% or 97.125%. so random girls can ask you why

[Asker]

Did you put 69 on purpose and you really think that slight difference would work

[ENTP_EMO]

no wasn't thinking of purpose.

[JohnFrost]

It's a bit generic I would look for one thing that makes you you. What makes you stand out and use that to define yourself.

But it kinda depends what you are looking for. Do you want as many reactions as you can or just the quality once.

[Dark93]

I'm going to use a fishing analogy because PoF lol.
The picture is the bait and the bio is reeling in the catch. So while you can make a great bio the picture is what matters first.

[Pauliho]

I'd split the paragraph up into sentences.

Then shorten those sentences down to sound more pragmatic/straightforward

[Slim57]

Doesn't matter most girls on pof are just looking for a fling.

[kingofknights]

The weather has been pretty
sh! ty lately. 😅