Can I get your opinion on my pof (dating site) summary?

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Is it good, any tips for improvement also does it even make a difference what you write on your summary. Like will a girl feel more inclined to respond to your message if your bio is good?
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Here's the updated version any better? The first sentence has a quoat from the bay area legend e40
Born and raised bay area native, dancing on top of chariots and turning tight ones. Introverted at heart I could enjoy a night of binge watching my favorite series but still have a blast going on a spontaneous adventure.
I enjoy back road car rides driving to viewpoints and star gazing. This summer I was island hopping the beaches of Thailand, next I want to experience the night life of ibiza.
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I also lift the last couple sentences from my original summary I just couldn't fit it all in the first update
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