Do I sound dumb or is this good?

[Anonymous]

Is this a good way to ask my boss to be switched as a special ed assistant? I'm worried about sounding dumb...

Good Morning,
I hope you are doing well! I wanted to reach out to discuss my assignment with ___ student. It is so important to me to provide the best support for all students but unfortunately, I believe that this placement is not a good fit for me and the student. I believe ___ could greatly benefit from working with a different assistant as working one-on-one has started to affect my mental health in ways that I hadn't anticipated. This is making it difficult for me to do my best here and outside of the school. I would greatly appreciate it if we could discuss a potential reassignment or adjustment, as I truly want to continue being a part of this
school and supporting students. I appreciate all of your support and I am open to any suggestions or discussions about how we can move forward.
Thank you,

[AviatorTom]

Staying positive and factual is important. I would delete the words "unfortunately, I believe that" and the following "I believe".

Other than that, it's a good statement that describes the situation and what should be done about it.

[Asker]

Thank you! I appreciate it!

[molonski2]

It certainly does not sound unreasonable , well written and decent logic , its fine , far from " dumb " .

[Asker]

Thank you so much!

[molonski2]

Good luck with it.

[Abbycado]

I think it sounds really good. Explains the issue in a thoughtful way and is respectful and concise.

[Asker]

Thanks so much! I just feel weird mentioning the mental health part but I feel it is important.. don't know how to word it well...

[Abbycado]

No, I think it is good. I think that is important and you said it to the point. I really think it is well written.

[AI Opinion]

Your message is thoughtful and clear. You express your concerns and the impact on your well-being, showing your dedication to both your role and the students. It's important to communicate openly about your needs, and you've done so respectfully. Ending with openness to discuss further demonstrates your willingness to work towards a solution. Trust your instincts here; advocating for yourself is a strength.

[es20490446e]

Look girl, it's not about saying the perfect words. It is about if the other person is willing or not.

Just say it.