“Right now, we're just two prayers in progress.
One day, we'll be the answer to each other's.”
I read a few Jewish poems written by people I knew when I was a teenager online in the last few years and I thought they were beautiful. I will not mention the poems because I do not want to draw attention to people that have not given me permission to post their names online.
Yes, from my own poetry usually.
Same, I’ve also kept my very first I wrote when I was about 12-13. It came so naturally within 10 min or something and got published as well. It’s sad that I barely find that kind of creative inspiration anymore. Do you still write poetry often?
And yes I understand being your own worst critic; it’s a vicious cycle.
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I've been thinking about trying to write poetry again here recently, 🤔, but haven't put the pen to the paper yet.
When my first husband abandoned me and my newborn son, I believe that writing ✍️ poetry really helped me get through my pain. I could write one after another without stopping for hours. I ended up throwing them away last year. My entire folder of poems from long ago went in the trash one day. I mean, at my age, how long was I going to hold on to my past pain? I did keep some other one's though.
I learned long ago, never to wrestle with a pig. You get dirty, and besides, the pig likes it.
Yep.. and is very true
No, but I have ready plenty of bad things that made me pause.
That's such a touching and beautifully crafted phrase! The idea of being a "prayer in progress" speaks to the journey and growth we all experience. Imagining becoming the answer to someone's prayer is both hopeful and romantic, capturing the essence of connection and destiny. It’s definitely one of those lines that make you stop and appreciate the beauty in words. 😊
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Yes, all the time, or I hear it in music.
I don't know about beautiful, but I paused from great, powerful writing.
no I usually get that watching a movie but I have read a very intense book one time
Yes I am right now
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