Is what I wrote wrong?

[Anonymous]

English is not my first language, but I like to write in English. Where do you think I went wrong?

"Hey, Lule. Did you remember that I sacrificed my whole night for you? It means you're precious to me. But we won't meet again. Don't worry, I won't forget you.."

(Lule is my father's ex-wife's neighbor's dog..)

I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't be offensive to me.

#helloplsanswer

[SamK20]

"Hey, Lule. Did you remember that I sacrificed my whole night for you? It means you're precious to me. But we won't meet again. Don't worry, I won't forget you.."

Did someone tell you that you wrote something incorrectly? Because I don't see anything wrong here.

You could replace "Did" with "Do", that will make it sound better. Or, you could say " Have you forgotten" instead of "Did you remember".

:)

[Asker]

Omg.. I didn't pay attention to the second sentence, thank you 🙂

[SamK20]

No problem.

Your question has sparked my memory, I believe the name of the little chiwawa I had as a small child literally had the same name, not spelt the same but perhaps with the same pronunciation, if I'm pronouncing it correctly.

How are you pronouncing "Lule"? Is it like (Loo-li)?