Is this good way to ask her to marry me?

Okay Guys I have never thought this day would come I honestly want to ask this girl to marry me my life without her seems like hell. We used to walk in the park and there's kids section there and kids toy's I was there today without her and I saw us as a family. Now I want to walk with her to That place and tell her I saw us as a family and we have a kid playing here and I want to marry you and make a family.
What you think about it?
Is this good way to ask her to marry me?
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