Do you think this sounds like a good message to send to her?

Things have been a bit rough between us after I said something about her and I do some friends (don't ask, I won't tell).

I'm thinking of sending her this:

I know things have been pretty tense between us lately,
I'd really like to talk about it, but only when you're ready.

What do you think?
Do you think this sounds like a good message to send to her?
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