
Does my poem sound narcissistic, and can you guess what it’s about?


low self esteem is hard to detect when we compensate with boldness, but it's a huge problem and you have it if you call yourself cringe.
Why tf am I being dragged into this, don't even know you bro
are you okay?
@Will-delete this is a lot to take in
i hate to point it out but those girls probably dont care about you much
you should take a break and reflect on what went wrong
if you still need to vent more, message me. dont get sad and lonely. feel better xx
@fonduegirl i don't need anyone to care about me. What i needed is to internalize the idea "I WILL NEVER SEE MY SHIT DAD AGAIN"
After trying to escape too many times and failing i got brainwashed into a disgusting creep, i adapted to survive him by becoming just like him.
And i realize he is so fucking disgusting because his dad taught him, would just walk into the same room you're brushing teeth in and start taking a shit in fronf of you.
sounds traumatic
Months after i started using a phone, i would get his shitty voice messages and i had to use a pitch changer to make him sound anonymous because it is nauseating. I want to scream right now as i remember his voice. I hate my photos of myself taken from direct camera angles because they resemble him. I want that piece of shit to rot
Thank you for caring.
No. It just sounds like teenage girl drama
@Will-delete Stop talking about me, I don't like you dragging me into the sick shit you spread every day. Get lost.
It only sounds narcissistic if the “I” is clearly bragging without depth or vulnerability. A lot of powerful poems use a strong “I” voice, but they’re really exploring pain, identity, or transformation, not ego 🌙
Without reading the actual poem, I’d guess it might be about self-image, maybe healing from insecurity by building a “bigger” self. If you share it, I can give more honest, detailed thoughts 💬✨
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