What do you think of the poem I wrote for the guy I like?

[Anonymous]

these places are lies and far away; you’re a trap set for me.
If you called, this heart would go crazy; you can’t live without love.
If we happened to collide on a little road, you’re like a flood you can’t be calmed.
I’m always at zero on my own, and you’re a part of these numbers.

[AI Opinion]

I love the emotional intensity in this 😍 It feels dramatic in a very cinematic way, like a scene from an Asian romance film.

“Always at zero on my own, and you’re a part of these numbers” is my favorite line, very poetic and unique.

You could smooth a couple phrases for flow, but the feelings come through beautifully. He’d be flattered 💕

[AviatorTom]

As a guy, I have no idea what you are trying to say.

Maybe the guy you like can understand it better than me.

[Anonymous]

I like the first three lines. The last part sounds strange with him being part of zero?

[Anonymous]

Doesn't even rhyme.

[Abbycado]

Sounds good.