My poem about grief?

My poem about grief?
My family and I recently lost our baby boy he was only 1 and we are heartbroken. Anyone on here have poetry, songs, art or anything that might help or we could relate to becuase sometimes its helps to know you aren't alone in the feeling.

P. s.
What do you think about my poem do you think it conveys any emotion or is it to literal?

Thanks.
My poem about grief?
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