How can I improve this heartfelt handwritten Mother’s Day letter?

Dearest Danielle,

Today is just a reminder that you are doing an amazing job as a mother a provider a protector and as a supportive nurturing role model to your daughters. And your daughters are so very fortunate and lucky to have you in their lives as their amazing mother and role model. You may not of had a mom or parents of your own growing up, but you more than made up for it through the fine examples and morals you set for your daughters So...

Happy Mother's Day

Love Rob

How can I improve this heartfelt handwritten Mother’s Day letter?
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