What are some good things to compare a woman's beauty to?

[Dim_121]

For example “Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?” Or the Starry sky on a warm night in the desert? No for your beauty easily exceeds those things.

PS yes I suck at poetry

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This is what I came up with.
Dear
“Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?” Or the bright starry sky on a warm day away in the desert? How about I compare thee to a finely cut jewel just put into its display case, ready to show off its beautiful and newly hand cut surfaces? No for they pale in comparison to your amazing smile alone. Your beauty is only surpassed by your beautiful heart, strength of character, and adorable personality. I hope that sometime we can go on an adventure together just

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just the two of us. How about we take off to a galaxy far, far, away, or to head to Pacific Playland while we dodge walkers on the way there? How about we just hop into a blue box and get lost in space and time? If you wish we could be guests in an old castle where the dishes talk and the footstool barks.
Sincerely

What do you guys think?

[lightbulb27]

How about sometjimg oersonal she can get to know you deeper. Ex... make it true to you...

When im with you... you remind me of how i felt seeing a Christmas tree for the first time. Yoi know... the ccolors.. loghts... people smilong and happy... magical moment of warmth thst you know you are at home and it is good. I know you dont use lots of colors like the trer but that is how i feel. It is your beauty outside and inside thst i experiemce. Dont hold ot against me... o cannot help what i feel... k can only let you know that you are special to me as noone else makes me feel like that. I can only hope you will give me the chance over time to get to know you better and understand more.

Something like tthat...

[Dim_121]

Yeah I get what your saying spelling errors aside. I'm guessing that you wrote that on you phone?
I'll probably add in a line about wanting to know her personality better in there somewhere. However I'm not a real comparable experience guy. Also given that she was homeschooled I doubt that some of the xp that I want to share she would even understand. That don't hold it against me line seems like a cowardly way to say I like you but please don't hurt me. It is a back door in the note that is not needed. Thanks for the example and advice lightbulb.

[lightbulb27]

sorry... carpel tunnel issues and an android...

not sure about "hold it against" part... another gag question:) I wrote that because I feel like she has negative repsonse to positive... in other words, her conscious and her sub conscious messagesa re different. for example, you say you are beautiful and consciously she says "aw, he's so sweet" but her sub conscious says "you know you are ugly, if he's saying that, he's an idiot... and you don't want an idiot". So It was an attempt to reach out to her to engage within herself not to hold back. that was the though.

approach it whatever way is true to you.

[Dim_121]

Aw ok

[SnatchFinderGeneral]

listen to this: It will give you some inspiration

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ke1v3Y-vUug

[Dim_121]

inspiration yes, ideas no.

[soulbabe]

i have never seen someone with as much soul kind nature you make the goddesses envy your beauty the stars shine brightly in your honor the sun rises and sets with you- you are like a desert flower a rare but beautiful occurrence I look into your eyes and all I see and hear no one but you are the sun that lights up my day and the moon who shows me such mysterious beauty

[Dim_121]

O nice poem anonymous. It is a beautiful poem.

[soulbabe]

did that help any?

[Dim_121]

Yup him when I first read it it showed you as anonymous now it is showing your name soulbabe.

[soulbabe]

your eyes are more beautiful than a thousand twinkly jewels and lol sorry i did Anon because poetry embarrass me a bit lol

[soulbabe]

i can do it just bugs me a bit

[Dim_121]

Well yours is a lot better than my poetry.

[soulbabe]

well i wouled go that far and i hope it helps a little

[Dim_121]

It did thanks

[soulbabe]

wouldn't * stupid cell and your welcome

[soulbabe]

thanks for the MHO

[Dim_121]

Your welcome Soulbabe, you earned it.

[soulbabe]

thanks lol

[Anonymous]

She is more precious than rubies and nothing you desire can compare to her.

[Dim_121]

Thanks anonymous

[Anonymous]

probably a snake because they lure you in with the sweetness and the pu$$y, then they fuck you over in the end

[Karōshi]

A highly edible desert.

[Dim_121]

Um I'm trying to flirt with her in a letter not get her hangry at me. Lol

[Karōshi]

Tell her you want to demolish her like a chocolate cake! lmao

[Anonymous]

Her hotter sister's boobs.