Is this review I wrote too long?

[Anonymous]

i was going to leave a review online about my old highschool.

But is the review i wrote too long?

I was enrolled in this school from 2011 to 2014 i have to say i never really liked it.
by watching & listening i found out early most teachers did not care about educating students.
They were there just for a paycheck. when you have teachers like that kids tend not to care about school.
for me the first 3 years high school it was a place i had to go i felt like i was stuck there.

my last year was by far the best
a new first time teacher came in to the school.
you can tell she was a true educator.
answer your questions helped you was polite you could say hi in the hallway you would get a hi back.
where as the other teachers would just give you a weird look if you said hi to them.

Overall experience 3 stars to the great new educator back in 2014.

[Oliverlogan263]

Your review isn't too long, but there are a couple things I might tweak:

- I'd add a paragraph break after talking about your first 3 years, to separate that from talking about your better last year experience.

- You could maybe trim it down a bit by shortening some sentences/paragraphs, like saying "Most teachers didn't seem to care about teaching" instead of the longer quote.

- Might be good to end on a more positive note than just "3 stars." Maybe mention a specific teacher you DID like besides the new 2014 one, to balance it out.

Other than that, you covered the main points well - your perspective over the years, issues with teacher engagement, and call out the good teacher. Reviews are supposed to give an honest assessment, so I think the length is fine. Go ahead and post it - could be helpful for other students deciding on the school!