... Have you Ever? (Page 3)

[vekin]

Intresting to know how you came up with the idea to write this

[Betwyn]

I was really upset and angry.

[vekin]

And how about now?

[Betwyn]

I feel fine right now. well, a little tired.

[vekin]

know youc an always contact me when you feel down... don't know if I can make you feel better but who knows

[Starfishlover]

You need to be in a mental instititution

[SavageNick87]

Lmaooooo this made me crack tf up lol

[Betwyn]

nah, I don't. but thanks :)

[maykays]

I thought it was beautiful, very well written :)

[Betwyn]

Thank you

[DivaMonae]

No and I pray that no one else does...

[FighterGirl13]

Do you by chance have a revenge issue?

[Betwyn]

Not overly, no. No more then the next, average person.

[FighterGirl13]

Punch a pillow though I have once or twice had the urge to strangle someone but I didn't because I knew it was wrong.

[FighterGirl13]

But your writing just prove you are a very good writer try writing a murder mystery that might help the revenge of the sith issue that you are having.

[Betwyn]

I've tried writing stories before.

They didn't really work. Best I've done, was a series of short stories, that go together..

But, some of them, are more like this one.

[FighterGirl13]

I'm impressed just don't do it in real life that would be scary.

[Betwyn]

Well, thank you :)

It is interesting how many people don't understand art..

[FighterGirl13]

I write fanfics to let my emotions out. What you have written is what I refer to as devious writing. That's a compliment. :)

[Amplify]

How did you become an administrator?

[Betwyn]

I'm not an admin.

[Amplify]

whatever the s means.

[Betwyn]

I'm a moderator.

I have been for awhile now.

[Amplify]

And the thought that someone capable of typing this was given a position of power here scares me. But bees scare me too, so it's not like I matter.

[Betwyn]

Anyone, can write anything.

And, mods don't really have a lot of power.

[Amplify]

@Betwyn Presidents can't have sex scandals. It will most likely cause them to stop being presidents. And if mods don't have a lot of power then I wanna be one. I love those tiny little badges. They are adorable.

[Betwyn]

I'm pretty sure a President or two has had a sex scandal.

and, contact the admin and apply.

[Amplify]

@Betwyn They sure did. And we got very mad at them. And I thought you had to be nominated first before requesting a position?

[Betwyn]

Back in the day you didn't.

I honestly don't know about now.

[soberpiper]

Wonder if questions like these should be reported.

[Betwyn]

It isn't a question, it is a piece of writing.

Thank you for reading it and having a reaction to it.

[soberpiper]

It began with the sentence, " have you ever?" by definition making it a question.

[Betwyn]

And yet, it is classified as a take, and is obviously not just a simple question posed.

[soberpiper]

Then your piece was improperly classified. A "take" is one's position on something and not something that is asked of others. But either way. It is what it is.. Thanks for posting..

[Betwyn]

Takes are also where members of the community can post poetry and other writings.

[soberpiper]

Cool. thanks for the tip.

[epiman94]

No, I haven't. This reading disturbed me. :O

[Natedoggfamm]

lay off di cannibus mate

[Betwyn]

allergic to it 'mate'

[jakeofalltrades]

well. . . shit, you should probably get some help

[Betwyn]

Where is the fun in that? writing is my help...

[JackKerouac77]

Did you just read my inner psyche?

[Betwyn]

Maybe we're just connected in ways that defy space and time Jack.

[JackKerouac77]

PERHAPS

[SurströmmingLover]

That's unacceptable. reported

[Betwyn]

Thank you.

[BelleGirl21]

I am surprised this is coming from a moderator as well. :/

[SurströmmingLover]

@BelleGirl21 yes and unfortunately it can't be reported

[BelleGirl21]

I know because as a moderator I would've already :/

[been_waiting]

No? Jesus H Christ man

[YourFutureEx]

Yes but I'm still alive!

[Phoenix98]

Good but very dark lol.

[Betwyn]

thank you

[Phoenix98]

You're welcome from one poet to another.

[Betwyn]

Do you ever feel like you are just the tool? a slave to the words?

Often, I have an emotion, I sit at the keyboard, and it just comes, unbidden.

[Phoenix98]

I am a instrument to the art a vessel in which the words flow though, when I write my hand simply moves and the words come to me as if they want to get on the parchment.

The mark of a true poet is one who has suffered for his craft
-Phoenix-

[Christie_01]

What the hell is wrong with you? :/

[Betwyn]

I'm just a broken wind-up toy, forgotten on the shelf...

[Christie_01]

Oh ok. don't kill yourself

[Xiloquin]

Too much internet for today.

[Betwyn]

Do you really live in Palestine?

[Xiloquin]

yea, why?

[Betwyn]

I've never met anyone who was living in Palestine.

[Xiloquin]

You just did. Congrats? xD

[Betwyn]

lol thanks :)

[Xiloquin]

Np. Was that poetry? For a second I thought you were a psycho.

[Betwyn]

I suppose it's poetry. I am reluctant to use that word, as that would imply that I am a poet. I have no training, so, I feel that would be presumptuous of me.

[Xiloquin]

Come come. I'll take you on a tour here, it will be inspiring for your poetry, since you like blood so much. lmao

[Xiloquin]

I'm kidding, things are peaceful right now.

[Betwyn]

Actually, I'm not really a fan of blood, or violence. But, this came to me, and well, it is powerful.

People react to it, good and bad.

[Xiloquin]

I like it. Keep up the good work. :)

Aaaaand whenever you need inspiration you know where to look. Jk Jk. xD

[Anonymous]

... You need help. Bad.

[Betwyn]

writing, is my help.

[Opinion Owner]

Then keep doing it. Forever.

[emerald77]

... What? Umm, okay...

[Keyspirits]

Im right here baby 💋

[Anonymous]

This is the sickest take so far! Congrats

[Betwyn]

um.. thanks?