Does this sound pitiful , Or will it make him think?

[annie6815]

Please. I'm not blaming you. It is what it is. You've made it very clear what you want with me. And , every woman in this world deserves more. I'm not mad. I wanted you bad. I've tried and tried to show you what I am , who I am. It doesn't matter. And, it's not going to happen. Ever. So, fine.

[whiskeyontherocks]

Seems like you have some hostility
I’d probably end with “it’s over”instead of “fin”. Fin just seems indecisive.
If it’s just not working just say that and end it you don’t Have to give any reason.

[annie6815]

I'm asking your opinion as a guy: ? Do I sound insecure? I am indecisive. I want him to think: will this get him to think:

[countrygirl8754]

I hope it will make him think

[annie6815]

Is it a strong statement. It's from me and From reading it too many times, I can't grab it or even think... please help girl

[Ruenella_]

That's good.

[annie6815]

What's good? This answer?

[Ruenella_]

Yes.

[annie6815]

Do you think it will make him think or did I end it for good