Is this text grammatically correct?

[LaFemmeFatale_1]

I believe the most outstanding of the human abilities is the way we can get back on our feet after any storm.

Like a phoenix,

As if you’ve never been wounded,

You can smile again,
You can laugh again,
You can dance again,

You can get born again,

Doesn’t matter what you lost in the storm, as long as you’ve got yourself,

You are the God of your own life.

Sometimes we forget that,

But the life never fails to remind us that only you are the captain of your ship, and you can take it anywhere you wish.

As long as you remember that “the ship in the harbor is safe, but that’s not what the ships are built for”

So, raise your chin up, babe

be the captain you were born to be,

There will be storms,

hell yeah,

There will be typhoons,

But you’ll dance through them and smile again, stronger and happier after each storm you encounter.

And maybe that’s all that matters, because in the end all the empires fall and all the kings die and before we die, we’ll only think of the times when we were truly happy.

And maybe that’s all that matters.

[AviatorTom]

Grammatically, it's correct, with a few things forgiven for poetic license. For example, the subject of "Doesn’t matter what..." is missing. Subject-verb agreement is correct in all text, though some people might have a problem with a plural noun (that's not the subject) immediately before a singular verb.

[LaFemmeFatale_1]

How do I correct that part? “Doesn’t matter what” plus subject, what can I add? English is not my native language and I don’t fully grasp that

[AviatorTom]

@lafemmefatale_1 You don't need to change it, it's fine the way it is. As @b-river says, it's poetry and doesn't need to be grammatically correct.

[LaFemmeFatale_1]

Thanks

[b-river]

This doesn't need to be grammatically correct, it's poetry :) I think it says it in itself, you should play and feel free and experiment to say exactly what you want to say, and I think you have. Think less on wether its grammar is right, think if it's truth is right to you

[LaFemmeFatale_1]

Thanks, a nice advice

[NotTacocaT6969]

You can get born again should be “be born”


You’ve got should be “you have”


There are too many ands at the end. Need to eliminate at least one.


Other than that it’s great.

[tesniolite]

language is ever-changing

grammar isn't real

[BaileyWillow]

I believe the most outstanding of the human abilities is the way we can get back on our feet after any storm.

Change it to..

I believe the most outstanding of human abilities... (lose the "the")

[FifiJones]

Maybe 'are the way' at the beginning. Looks alright otherwise (poetry is not meant to be strict on form, if you ask me).
It glorifies storms, which I find wrong and dangerous, individually and collectively, but gramatically it looks alright.

[Jennz6]

Sounds okay to me

[msc545]

The grammar is fine

[RavVid]

I think it is correct enough as a poem.

[Anonymous]

Yes, the text is grammatically correct.