Hey [NAME OMITTED], I'm a Junior at [NAME OMITTED]. I have seen you before in the halls and you immediately struck me as an absolutely beautiful girl. So I started asking some people for some information about you in the hope of approaching you eventually. But then I learned you were dating [NAME OMITTED]. I have no desire to mess up your current relationship, or put it under any stress, but I just had to say that you are beautiful, and that you deserve to be treated with care, affection and respect. I hope you take this in only the best way possible, and never think of yourself as anything less than amazing.
What can I add/ should improve/ should remove etc.? What is something I could say to let her know I'm interested should anything happen? Please help! Thanks.
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So, remove the part where it says: "I started asking some people for some information..." It makes you sound like a stalker. Are you friends with her on Facebook? I think she would probably be more comfortable with a "hello" and pretend like you haven't been "researching" her. That will come off as creepy and way too forward. What you are saying to her is sweet and beautiful, but I'm afraid she won't see it that way. However, write it down, and someday, if you wind up together, this will score major points... ;) Just get to know her for now and get a sense of if there is a mutual attraction. Don't go make any declarations of undying love or something. lol
Lol, I kind of went or the sappy love story novel as opposed to flirty message. She was online for a while today but I wimped out. Other than that alteration, should I still send the message, or should I just wait till she's online again and say hi? Or just go up to her in the halls? Because while I don't want to seem like a stalker, I do want to seem ballsy and confident, and seem like I know what I'm doing. Thanks! Like I said I have seen them seperate recently, and so I don't want to wait.
Also, keep in mind that while she added me on Facebook, she really doesn't know me at all. And she's a year older. AND she has a boyfriend(probably). I have a better version of this question on my page, could you post to that one instead?