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Part one

A small knock was heard, she and Aden exchange looks, who could it possibly be? Nobody knows they lived in the middle of the forest, hence their home was hidden and hard to find. A sudden loud bang followed, as petrified they were, she grabbed Aden and went towards a small tunnel she had dug before for escaping, to her surprise it was filled with mud and stones, how could it possibly be?, trembling and shaking together they ran in the corner as they were nowhere else to escape, then the door fell down. Three men entered, as they approached her and Aden she strike with her hands which had a knife and told them to leave. He laughed then grabbed her arm twisted and squeezed it until she cried out and dropped the knife he grabbed her and another man took Aden. They were both screaming for each other and he knocked her in her face several times until her face was bloodied and her teeth came out.


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