What I wrote so far for my story, How Do I Break It To You?

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What I wrote so far for my story, How Do I Break It To You?

Part 1: Hello

Hello....my name is Haley Pint. I am 19 years old. I recently moved to the United States from the United Kingdom. My parents work for high end companies. I am very proud of them, but not as proud they are of me. I am currently in college and I got to the United States from being accepted into a transfer program. I'm very excited since I never been outside of the UK before.

At first I was worried that I wouldn't be going since my parents were against it a few months ago. So I was very excited when they said alright and filled out the application.

But what I didn't know at the time was that someone would come along and change my experience here. It would soon become less of a great experience for me.

Part 2: Catching my flight at 10

I look down at my phone on my desk, it says 6am. Ok so I have 4 hours before my flight leaves. My mom and dad walk into my room of my dorm to help me with my stuff, which is a lot.

What I wrote so far for my story, How Do I Break It To You?
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