What do we think of the cake I made for my coworker's 24th Year of work?

What do we think of the cake I made for my coworkers 24th Year of work?
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11 mo
For those asking it's strawberry jam on top it's not a decorative there is two separate filings one is Bavarian the other is strawberry it's just strawberry went on top because it holds it's shape
What do we think of the cake I made for my coworker's 24th Year of work?
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