A fun-loving & personable woman who enjoys laughter & playful banter seeking a connection. With an insightful & compassionate nature (hence career) as a skilled listener I prefer communication to resolve issues not drama or games.
Traveled, across Canada for one, on Match to meet someone outside XX region.
Of recent European ancestry was raised on 'old school' values; family is important & so is physical affection (e. g., touch). Have a satire & dry wit sense of humour. Am not afraid of hard work or getting dirty, even done home renos
A curious intellectual, enjoy learning or trying new things, I have many interests. With a love of the outdoors swimming, hiking, & photography are some. And while I won't pass up an adventure am as content to curl up on a couch with a good book or engaging conversation.
Driven, with an accomplished medical career, I still always make time for others. Financially independent & self-assured = no social media & am not materialistic… I'd be far more impressed if you volunteer than by a BMW.
What Guys Said
I like it. It will appeal to the men you want to meet. The grammar and sentence structure could be better.
You might consider getting involved in local "society", wherever local people of means go.
What's wrong with the sentence structure & grammar? Nothing indicated on word or when posting it.
Not sure why you dropped "I" everywhere -- you end up with sentence fragments instead of sentences. I think complete sentences and paragraphs will be more appealing to the men you hope to meet, but I could be wrong.
"I'd be far more impressed if you volunteer than by a BMW." This is awkward because the two clauses "if you volunteer" and "by a BMW" aren't parallel. But maybe I'm just being pedantic.
Also it might be good to talk a bit more about the sort of person you hope to meet.
'I'm far more impressed by volunteering than by BMW ownership"
Oops. Please move the last sentence to follow "... aren't parallel." My feeling is that you can hardly go wrong by rewording this as an essay rather than a bullet point list.
Your tone is too formal but otherwise there’s enough detail for a guy to tell whether you’re a good fit or not at first glance. Just rewrite it in a more conversational tone
Can you give an example? I have been in such high end professions that I don't think I know how to write causally... I even text too formally per friends.
I don't think it's formal enough. It's all sentence fragments.
It's fine, though it could use some restructuring to make it a bit more concise.
It's not too long for someone looking for a serious partnership and some reading ability. If a man is too lazy to read a three hundred word profile, he's not serious.
@slatyb Exactly & thank you. 300 or even 500 words takes little time to read. If a guy is that lazy or inept he would never be compatible for anyone who is educated or looking for something serious.