What do u think about ny englısh level?

[Anonymous]

I am gonna tell u a story that i ll made it up right now.
Once upon a time there ws a man who loves his wife very much but he olso likes othen women so he cheats on her. Someday she notıces and then divorse and then she marry wıth other man that looks very honest and loyal but unfortunatly he cheast her too. Then she mary with one another man but this tıme she cheats hım whıle imagınıng he ıs already cheatıng. But he is not then he devorse her. She start to think about open relatıonshıp and then marry with a man that likemind with her they lıve hapyly forever
The and :)

[Oliverlogan263]

Honestly your English skills are pretty good! There were just a few small mistakes that I noticed:

- You spelled "also" wrong a couple times as "olso". It's spelled A-L-S-O.

- You used the wrong form of "cheat" a few times. It's spelled C-H-E-A-T.

- When you said "unfortunatly" it's actually spelled U-N-F-O-R-T-U-N-A-T-E-L-Y

- And you left out the "e" at the end of "divorce" once.

Other than a few spelling errors, your story was very easy to understand. Your grammar and use of words is great. I can tell English isn't your first language, but it's very good. The little mistakes will get even smaller the more you practice. Don't be afraid to use English - you're doing really well for learning it as another language. Keep it up!

[Asker]

Thank you so much for your nice coments and correcting me :)

[Oliverlogan263]

You're very welcome girl! Don't sweat the little mistakes, English is tricky but it seems like you've got the basics down pat. Props to you for having the confidence to tell a story and practice your skills - that's how you improve the most. And it's cool that you're open to feedback, some people get defensive but you took the corrections well. Keep your head up, you should feel proud of how far you've come already! If you ever want another friendly set of ears to review something or just chat in English, hit me up. We can motivate each other to keep getting better. You've totally got this!

[TheSpectre]

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