I said, "Hello everyone Apple here! I am a 13 yr old girl who have interest in Writing and Music. It took me a lot of courage to post my voice on here because I'm insecure about it. Anyways lately I've been trying to improve my English speaking. I recorded myself like I read some paragraph and record it and listen it but it is still weird like it was few months ago. You can see I mean you can hear I'm stuttering a lot. I thought it will be great to ask suggestions from native English speakers. So how do I improve my English? And what do you think about my English? It will be great if you share your opinion. Thank you".
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im not a native English speaker but i can suggest you to watch or listen to anything in English from native English speakers. you're great at English for the most part, but you need to work on forming sentences consistently (like subject-verb-agreement and not omit prepositions and articles. you'll know what i mean if u read the examples).
for example, instead of "im a 13 year old girl who HAVE interest in writing and music", it's "im a 13 year old girl who HAS AN interest in writing and music". "I recorded myself like I read some paragraph and record it and listen it" whereas it's "i recorded myself like i read some paragraph and recorded it and listened to it". i may be pointing out the pettiest stuff, but if u want your English to improve even more, you have to pay attention to the small stuff. (damn, been a while since i wrote a wall of text)
Lol thanks 😂