Poems to discomfort/delight

I bit an apple already deceased

Rotten stinking fruit-

My sorrow increased as I shivered into noon

For the sun was bright

But in no way warm to my flower soul.

I did not intend

To create black ice, unexpected pain

Merely traveling.

Breathlessly, I take blame and another

Bite from fallen fruit.
Poems to discomfort/delight

My soul is soon to fester
With the pig meat you possess
Placed to freeze in the very
Back of the fridge in lonesome
Blue-black wave, how forgotten
Is the ham and I, rotting.

Poems to discomfort/delight

I glided like a ghost
To the heart of the sea
And seeing what was there made me breathe,
For I saw the most beautiful
Offering of the sky,
In the form of a melodious sunset.
It was radiant, golden,
And I basked in the glory- until
The ocean called my name
and battered rocks
As gold became sliver
Losing itself beneath a fossil line.
So I sighed and continued on my way.

Poems to discomfort/delight

Alone in the sea
Waves flailing
Spitting sea salt
Seagulls in a herd, swarming, laughing
Sea icicles like touching angry bees
Rubbing away layers-
The salt, the barnacles
Alone in the sea

Poems to discomfort/delight

The epiphany of the road
Is to travel alone.
Past the bridge and the water
On each side-
On the opposite side
Of torched sunset, red gloaming
Daring you to respond to its
Bottomless gaze, the eye
In the sky before moonlight.

Purple flowers set on fire
Cry with petals drooping,
Screaming downward into dirt
With inevitable blazing
Experienced daily,
Healed only by spritzes of
Blissful rain from above, richly
Created underground
To spread parasitic roots
Into worm's mysterious land.


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  • You've a real talent, young lady, however as good as our writing is, I gather you are feeling down.
    Please either tell your parents or seek alternative help, there's nothing to be embarrassed about.
    If it's just your style of creative writing, please forgive me.

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  • Your pretty good, you should enter a competition for poetry. Good luck. Hope you win.😊

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  • Really well done. Kind of disturbing.

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  • These are awesome fluffy!

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  • These are all very good, I Especially loved the first one

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  • Excellent. The imagery. The simplicity. The rotten fruit. The Aimlessness.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  • I hope you wrote those!! :) they were amazing!!!

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  • Great stuff, really emotional

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  • It's really nice I love it 💖💕

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  • Great poem. Well done.

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  • Awesome!!!

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  • These are some amazing poems

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