In my book, I have an entire chapter devoted to satirical mockery of "fictional omnipotence" characters in comic books. Do you think it's good idea?

Basically, in chapter 12: Indestructible Aura, the villain, Tetra, absorbs the powers of Jonathan Tanner and combines them with her own powers. This allows her to turn back time for the entire Solar System, among other things. Now the heroes must concoct a way to defeat Tetra in reverse time! This chapter is specifically written to mock "fictional omnipotence" debates by showing that a Being which exists in reality, the reader, is greater than a being who exists only in the Mind.

In my book, I have an entire chapter devoted to satirical mockery of "fictional omnipotence" characters in comic books. Do you think it's good idea?
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