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First go at writing a story!

First go at writing a story!!!



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The moment the boy walked into the classroom with the note, she knew it was for her. She knew today was the day. The day of her life was going to take a major turn. It was going to be the biggest change of her life. Good or bad, she didn’t know. She trembled as she walked to the deputy’s office with her bag. As she entered the office, confronting thoughts entered her mind. She wondered what could happen, even though she had imagined this day but never expected it. The face of her grandmother clouded her mind, making her unable to think about anything else.



The office lady’s voice brought her to reality. The office lady pointed towards the deputy’s room at the corner and said “someone’s here to see you”. She felt a shiver run up her spine as she walked towards the room. A man and a women were sitting outside the room. They sheepishly smiled at her as she entered the room. As she entered the room she saw her deputy principle seated with another strikingly attractive young man and beautiful lady. They all smiled at her and asked her to take a seat. As she sat down, the man introduced himself as ‘Joel’ and that he was a police officer and the lady with a motherly face said she was a ‘FaCS (Family and Community Services) officer. They explained that their job was to make sure that young people were not at risk and to make sure they were living a healthy and happy life. They asked if she would be able to talk to them about somethings. They offered her to have a support person with her, but she said she was alright talking by herself. They asked her, if it was alright if the conversation they had was to be recorded, and she approved.



They asked her name, when was she born, who she lived with, about her family etc. Then they asked her if she knew why they were here, she straight up answered “No”. Then they asked if everything was alright at home and was there anything she could tell them about. She just answered “No”. And then again she drifted into her thoughts. And suddenly she started having flashback. Flashbacks about the nights her grandfather creeped into her room, the nights where she felt as if she was just a useless body and the mere purpose of her existence was to be used by her step grandfather.



Joel’s voice brought her back to real world. After many more questions, she just couldn’t hold it in anymore. She let the tears flow as she admitted and confessed the truth and allowed herself to show the reality.


She knew that there was no going back and she started to expect. The Unexpected.

First go at writing a story!
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