Every Time a Thought Comes to Mind
Every time a thought comes to mind,
It’s as if it controls me and sends me Thinking,
Thinking about how all comes aligned,
Which then sends me down a bottomless pit,
Never-ending until all problems are solved.
And as I accumulate more knowledge and wisdom,
Signals surround my brain and is thus revolved,
Which then Pulls me, Pushes me to the solid ground.
After that-the Answer then Appears
Crashing, Smashing, Bashing into my skull,
And Finally catching my breath, shedding no tears,
For then my soul is at peace once more.
The End
I wrote this poem back as a Junior in high school for an assignment. enjoy!
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I really enjoyed this! Appropriately it made me think.
Particularly loved the "pulls me pushes me" line.
So well done!
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thats a great piece!
@Rebel-Angel thank you guys.
there were supposed to be three stanzas here but gag messed up the formatting. oh well
@Still-alive : @apulu_imback taught me how to do this. Use "shift" & "enter" at the same time, it'll create a "normal" return (no line space). So it's manual, right, you have to go line by line, delete, and then shift return to get it to look the way you want it.
@Rebel-Angel fyi
@snowedin thanks for the mention! And yes, @Still-alive incase you're typing this mytake from your phone or tab where you can't use "shift" and "enter" trick then you may separate the stanzas by adding a picture between them. I did the same thing with this mytake of mine.
I can smile (Poetry) ↗
I love this stanza
"After that-the Answer then Appears
Crashing, Smashing, Bashing into my skull,
And Finally catching my breath, shedding no tears,
For then my soul is at peace once more."
This is really thoughtful and creative. It's nothing like you said your poems are, it's not cringe at all! It's well written!
Aww thank you. Yes this poem means much to me as it was the first one. I do tend to overthink a lit too.
First poems are always close to your heart. Continue posting more of your works! I won't mind if it's about video games or your cat too 😂
That's pretty good 👍